Month: April 2018

How to Write a Family History Short Story in 10 StepsHow to Write a Family History Short Story in 10 Steps



Family stories don’t have to be epic novels or mammoth books that tell a tale from birth to death of ancestors and their families. They can be short stories.

 

What is a Short Story?

 

A short story is when a character undergoes some event and experiences something which offers him change. Short stories usually say something a small something but delivered with precision.

Short stories are growing in popularity because they can deliver the same experience of a novel but can be consumed quickly. You can post them on a blog, in a family newsletter or turn them into a video or gather a bunch of them together into a short story collection.

A short story is not a life to death tale of an ancestor squeezed into a short time period. But instead a moment in an ancestor’s life in which he or she experiences a life-changing event.

A short story does not have a 3-act structure as we learn in our online class Plotting a Family History Story. Nor is it just Act 1, 2, or 3. It has its own individual structure.

It focuses on your protagonist ancestor. There is usually one conflict two at the most. There are generally no more than two to four characters. The story may transpire over one or two locations.

In a short story, you have less space to develop your ancestor’s character, less room for lengthy dialogue.

A short story is rarely over 10,000 words or below 500 words, commonly between 1500-5000 words. A short story can be read in a single-sitting but long enough to engage and move the reader. The topic is narrow and focused, the story’s meaning demonstrated through events that effect some change or denial of change in an individual.

We’ve broken down the process of writing a family history short story into 10 steps.

 

10 Steps to a Short Story

 

Step 1: Brainstorm

Brainstorm. Choose an exciting event from your research. It could be a happy moment or sad moment or a life-changing event. It could focus on a relationship between two ancestors or with a friend, acquaintance, stranger or spouse. It could be a trip or vacation, a sporting event or other activity. Mine your research and find an event worthy of a short story.

 

Step 2: Choose the Protagonist Ancestor

Choose the ancestor through whose perspective the story will be told. Every story needs a protagonist ancestor at the centre of the story. This allows the reader to connect with that ancestor and the story.

 

Step 3: Find the Story Goal

Before you start any story short or long you must identify the focus, the goal. All narratives have a focal point, a climax. Identify a purpose that your protagonist ancestor sought to achieve in his life. What is the central moment of the story when your ancestor reaches this goal and change occurs?  This is the climax, the goal of your narrative.

 

Step 4: Complete Ancestor Profile and Setting Details

Outline your ancestor’s profile and the setting details. It’s important to take some time to research and flesh out the details and descriptions of the setting of your story so that you can bring it to life on the page. Equally important is understanding your protagonist ancestor on an in-depth level. Complete an ancestor profile so that you can pull together your ancestor’s physical appearance but also come to comprehend what makes them tick and you are able to bring the most authentic ancestor to the page.

 

Step 5: Write the story as a one-page synopsis.

Go ahead and briefly sketch out a 1-page synopsis of your story as you see it. This will help you in the next step of creating a storyline.

 

Step 6: Outline the story structure using a storyline.

Below you’ll find a storyline for a short story. You want to break down your narrative into critical scenes, including opening scene, obstacles, climax and closing scene.

 

Step 7: Write your short story using scene and summary.

You’re now ready to write your short story. Make sure you find a delicate balance of scenes and summary to tell an intriguing tale that will bring an engaging and entertaining story to the page.

 

Step 8: Write a satisfying ending.

Make sure your story ends with a climax and conclusion that leaves your reader with a clear image and message.

 

Step 9: Rewrite for clarity, concision and structure.

Now it’s time to rewrite, making sure every detail is exact. Share your story with a writing group. Get feedback and allow that feedback to grow your writing skills.

 

Step 10: Share your writing with the world.

Now your story is ready to share with the world. Stories are meant to be read. Be brave and put it out in the world. Then, move on to the next story.

 

Need a short story example? One of the first short stories I ever read is Faulkner’s ‘A Rose for Emily.’  Go ahead and give a read and note how Faulkner has structured his story. While this is a fictional short story, I offer it up as a great example of short story writing structure.

 

How to Create a Content Plan for Your Family History BookHow to Create a Content Plan for Your Family History Book



The most important thing you can do before beginning to build your family history book is to create a content plan. Whenever we take on a project of this size, it’s always best to invest in some time upfront to think through your project.

Why you need a content plan

If you start to write without a content plan, you’re likely to waste a lot of valuable time staring at a blank screen. This is because you’re trying to simultaneously figure out what you want to write, who you want to write about while trying to write. You don’t have a clear idea of structure, organization and contents of your book.

With a plan, you’ll be more likely to start writing immediately. You’ll have a clear outline of each section, chapter, story and profile, the contents and how each will flow into the next.

By creating a content plan, you also engage your brain.  The process of thinking your book out in advance will result in you brainstorming about your book as you work, drive, relax, even sleep. You will continually be searching for ideas and making connections.

Trying to put together a family history book without a plan is an invitation to disaster. Most likely resulting in false starts, wasted efforts and low productivity.

You don’t have to know the content of each paragraph, each sentence, but you should aim for a well-thought-out strategy.

Step 1. Start with a Brain Dump

 

  • The best place to start creating the content for your family history book is with a brain dump. Dump all your ideas you have about your book into a mind map.
  • Start by identifying the focus of your book? One ancestor, a couple, a family group or one or more surnames?
  • You then want to break down the focus into smaller components, subtopics, maybe even themes.
  • What are the main points you want to cover? With a highlighter, mark each of the big points with a single colour. These might become sections or chapters in your book.
  • What are the subtopics? These will become individual stories or profiles within the chapters or sections of your book. Highlight each of these with another colour.

 

Step 2 Organize your brain dump

There is no one single right way or tool to organize your family history book. What might be a productive process for one can be very frustrating an inefficient for another?

But there are many planning tools available to help you take your brain dump ideas and organize them. We listed a selection below including both low-tech and high-tech.

 

  1. Lists & outlines. After identifying the “big picture” of your book, the next step can be to expand your list from the main idea into key supporting points for each chapter in the form of a simple list.

 

  1. Index cards. Index cards are another time-proven writing tool. I use index cards to organize my stories, but they can be equally beneficial in assembling a book. Each card contains an idea which is then inserted into the right location in the organization of your book. Index cards can organize the topics of a book or the scenes and summary within a family history story. 

 

  1. Sticky notes. Sticky notes work much like index cards and help you to identify and organize your thoughts quickly. Add just one thought, idea or supporting detail to each sticky note, then attach the notes on a wall or whiteboard or tabletop. Move them around to organize your book. You can use different-coloured sticky notes to colour code your idea.

 

  1. Create a table. Using a word processing program, like Microsoft Word, you can create a detailed content plan your book. For example, create a 2, 3 or 4 column table in Word, you can list your book into sections, chapters and stories and profiles.

 

  1. Spreadsheet. Consider using a spreadsheet program, like Microsoft Excel, to plan your book. The process is similar; in the first column, enter the title for each story or profile. In the second column, summarize the main idea associated with each story or profile. In the third column, enter the events and ideas you want to include. Check out the spreadsheet created by one of my students in our recent course, Plotting a Family History Story. This is part of an outline of a family history story. But the same can be done to organize an entire family history book.

 

  1. Mind maps. I use mind mapping software for all my projects in the very early stages to get down my ideas and help organize them into a logical process as I mentioned above. But mindmaps can also be used to complete your outline. You can make your mind map on a simple piece of paper, a whiteboard or in a digital program like Scapple. I use Scapple for all my brainstorming tasks because first I can use it do braindump but then easily rearrange my brain dump into a logical order for my book. I rearrange as many times as I like never killing a tree.

 

  1. Digital Storyboard.  Another option is to create a digital storyboard. One of my favourite digital storyboards comes in the Scrivener software. Scrivener uses a digital corkboard with digital index cards to help you outline and organize your story and book. Watch this video to learn how to make a storyboard in Scrivener.

Before diving in feet first to create a family history book, take the time to brainstorm and organize your thoughts into a content plan. Explore the various options to outline your project and choose the one that works best for you.

 

 

 

 

 

The sooner you come up with your own efficient way of organizing your ideas before you begin writing, the sooner you can embark on your journey of writing your book!

Brainstorming and organizing a content plan is just two steps in the process of building a

 

family history book. In our new workbook, Build a Family History Book, A Planning Guide to Getting it Done, we identify an 8-step process for creating a family history book. It includes numerous templates to help you clearly define and organize the content for your family history book and the process to get you across the finish line.

 

5 Tips for Writing a Family History that Entertains Like a Movie5 Tips for Writing a Family History that Entertains Like a Movie



Most of us start writing our family history as summary. Summary is not a bad thing, and it serves a purpose in our family history stories. However, it is only one part of the equation.

Narrative Nonfiction = Scene + Summary

Eventually, we realize that to engage our family in our story and thus their family history, summary is not enough. We must entertain as well. It’s then that we must develop our knowledge of narrative nonfiction – the writing of true stories.

One aspect of narrative nonfiction that beginning family history writers struggle to understand is the difference between scene and summary.

What is Summary?

Summary, by its very name, encompasses a significant amount of information in a condensed form.

Summary is also known as exposition, and it is condensed narrative covering perhaps many events in just a few sentences, sparse details and may transcend a considerable amount of time. Summary is useful for going over information that we need to know but is not as exciting but still may be necessary to understand the story. Most times, the beginning family history writer overuses summary, often to the point of exclusivity.

What is Scene?

A scene, however, is an event, place or action that the reader experiences first-hand. In a family history story, a scene is an event chosen from your ancestor’s life retold in the fullness of time and place. Scenes are the ultimate tool for showing and not telling. A scene is a single, specific setting that creates the event as an experience for the reader. A family history scene is constructed from the documents of an event. The details are filled in with historical context, social history, eyewitness account and or diaries and letters. (If you’re lucky enough to have them. Most of us will piece together a scene through documents and social history. While you can write a great story that is all scene and no summary the reverse is not true. All summary and no scene makes for a very boring story.

Think of the difference between scene and summary this way. It’s the difference between being told about a car accident (summary) and watching it happen before your own eyes (scene). You may be able to imagine how horrible it was if someone tells you about it, but when you see it happening first-hand, you never forget it.

The best way to write a scene that will engage and entertain your readers is to think of your writing cinematically.  Like movie playing in your mind’s eye. Of course, just thinking in your mind’s eye is one thing, getting it down on paper is a whole other matter.

Here are five tips for writing a scene that will entertain your readers like a movie.

5 Tips for Writing a Scene Like a Movie

1. Slow down. Don’t cram ten years into one paragraph, pick a single moment, a single event in your story and show it happening.

2. Make sure the event you choose is important, pivotal and will reveal relevant information about your ancestor or the story.

3. Show your ancestor in action either through physical movement or with dialogue or both.

4. Set your ancestor in their surroundings using all the senses. There should sights, sounds, smells even taste and touch if relevant.

5. Give the reader insight into your ancestor’s personality and state of mind through their actions, the look on their face, their voice and the words they speak.

When we take the time to learn to write a scene as part of narrative nonfiction, to show the crash rather than tell about it, we transform our family history stories into an experience for the writer and not a summary of facts.

Learn how to take an event in your ancestor’s life and bring it to the page in the Masterclass.