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Identify the Best Stories Hidden in Your Family History ResearchIdentify the Best Stories Hidden in Your Family History Research
Everybody has a story. That’s true. But no question some stories are better than others. Why? Because they are built around great conflict. The bigger the battle, the bigger the story. When it comes to writing stories that will entertain and engage your family you want to seek out stories that provide conflict to the reader. Give your readers a story filled with struggle, and they will want to learn more.
Sometimes, as writers, we struggle to identify this conflict in our ancestor’s life. On the surface, our ancestor’s life seems boring and mundane. However, if you take a few minutes before you begin to write you might be surprized at what you will find. Once you find a little conflict your job of writing an engaging and entertaining family history just got easier.
Here are some tips on how to help you find the conflict in your ancestor’s life that you can in turn structure your story around.
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Look for Major Change
When human beings go through change, there is generally conflict. That conflict might come in the way of people who don’t want to change or refuse to change. Others might change reluctantly and find it very stressful. What kinds of change can we see in our family history research? Look for ancestors who are forced to change jobs, or must leave their country, or are sent away to school or forced into a marriage. Perhaps a woman who has had a father or husband to lean on all her life, only to lose them and must provide for herself and children. Where there is change, there is generally both inner and outer conflict as our ancestors attempt to deal with the change.
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Look for Major Accomplishments
Another excellent method of looking for conflict in an ancestor’s life is to seek out any significant accomplishments your ancestor had in their life. For example, purchasing land particularly if they were locked in a social status that prevented it. Another example may be acquiring an education, or having children, or building a successful business. Once you’ve identified the accomplishment look at the obstacles that an ancestor faced in achieving that accomplishment. A woman who wants a family may find herself struggling with finding an appropriate husband and then only to have multiple miscarriages before finally having a child. Few of us achieve great things without having to jump through some hoops and overcome a few obstacles. Shape your story around those challenges on the path to finally acquiring their goal and you have an entertaining family history story.
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Seek out Motivations
Everything we do in our life is generally motivated by something in our past. We may realise it, we may not. We rarely do anything, make any change, or seek out any goal in our life without it being driven by something in our past. For example, if your ancestor emigrated, why? What motivated this emigration? Perhaps it was poverty, maybe it was the fear of war, maybe it was certain conscription into the army. Seek out the motivations behind your ancestor’s actions, and you will often find a conflict they have grappled with and that has eventually driven the choices in their life. Shape your story around these motivations and your readers will be glued to your story to the very end.
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Look for Actions that Took Place Around or Because of Historical Events
Was your ancestor’s life affected by local, regional or world events? These events may have presented them with conflict. For instance, did a World War present conflict for an ancestor? We’re they a conscientious objector, or perhaps troops marched through their town changing their lives forever? We’re they conscripted? Sometimes conflict is thrust upon our ancestors by outside events they had no control over. Look for how a historical event propelled great conflict into your ancestor’s life and altered its projection forever.
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Look for ‘What If’s’
What would have happened if…? If my ancestor had not emigrated? If my ancestor had been conscripted into the army? If we look at our ancestor’s life from the perspective of a ‘what if’ then it can often show some struggles and conflicts that our ancestors faced in their life. When looking for conflict in our ancestor’s life, it might be buried in what they managed to avoid. Sometimes I hear family historians say, nothing significant happened in my ancestor’s life. There is no conflict. It may appear as if there was no conflict because your ancestor managed to avoid being caught up in such struggles. Look at the choices they made and the ‘what ifs.’ What if they hadn’t made this decision or taken that option, you might be surprised at what you find. It’s not that the conflict didn’t exist, your ancestor may have been one step ahead of the conflict.
Take a look at your family history research using the 5 tips above and you might just discover some amazing family history stories waiting to be written.
Finding the Conflict and the ObstaclesFinding the Conflict and the Obstacles
One of the fundamental components of any good family history story is recognizing a conflict your ancestor faced in their life and bringing that to the front of the story. Without conflict, there is no story. Story is built around a conflict, a challenge and the obstacles your character faces in pursuit of his goal. It’s crucial in keeping your reader engaged to the end. It creates a story question. How does my ancestor overcome this conflict, this challenge? The reader wants the answer and, for this reason, stays with the story to the end.
By the end of the beginning of your story, you want your readers to understand your ancestor’s challenge and how they intend to overcome this problem.
Let’s create an ancestor, Henry Jones, for the purposes of demonstrating conflict and obstacles, and follow him through a story plot. Of course, in your own family history, you’re going to pull this information from your research.
We start by understanding Henry’s goal.
Henry’s Goal: Henry Jones wants to own land.
Of course, in order for this story to be a story there must be some conflict, some challenge in Henry’s pursuit of that goal.
Henry’s Conflict– Henry cannot own land in his current country, land is owned by the wealthy, Henry is a peasant and will spend his life farming the land of the wealthy.
The First Turning Plot Point – this is the moment when your ancestor changes his path in pursuit of his goal. This is also often called the inciting incident.
Henry’s First turning point – Henry makes the decision to emigrate to the New World, where land is plentiful.
Obstacles
In our family history story, obstacles block our ancestor on their path to achieving their goals. In a story plot, they are often referred to as plot points.
There are three types of obstacles that your ancestor may confront:
ancestor vs. another person
ancestor vs. circumstance
ancestor vs. self
What is the difference between conflict and obstacle?
The conflict is the overall idea; Henry cannot own land. While obstacles are those roadblocks that stand between Henry resolving his desire to own land.
Keep in mind that both conflicts and obstacles may be both internal and external, they can come from within the protagonist or from external forces, friendly and not so friendly.
If we continue to follow the example above, our ancestor Henry who wished to own land may come up against many obstacles.
Henry’s Obstacles
Obstacle 1 – Henry arrives in United States, there is plenty of land but he must head west, Henry has no money to get there. He overcomes this obstacle by getting a job. ancestor vs. circumstance
Obstacle 2 – He’s saving his money and close to leaving when he meets the love of his life. But, Mary doesn’t want to leave her family behind and travel west for land; Henry must convince her this decision is in their best interest. ancestor vs. another person
Obstacle 3 – Along the way they fall on hardships, and Henry doubts his choices. Ancestor vs. self
Obstacle 4 – There journey is delayed by a violent storm. ancestor vs. circumstance
These obstacles are plot points in our story and keep our reader compelled to keep reading. The obstacles tell a story, but also show growth of your ancestor, from poor to rich, sad to happy, hate to love, weak to strong.
Look at your research, what obstacles did your ancestor’s face in pursuit of their goals?
Sincere thanks, Lynn!! You have a way to fire me up each time!
You are so good at prompting me to keep at my goal to write the stories of my ancestors. Your reminders are timely, motivating and instructive! Thanks so much, Lynn, for this constant contact which is frequent but not overwhelming.
Dee
Wonderful! I would bet that most of us have exactly these ordinary ancestors! And, oh how we need and want to honor them with a good story. Thank you for the encouragement and pointing to ways we can do just that!